This is coming along nicely. The artwork really helps here. In class, please remind me to teach you all how to add sound effects. I think something like this could be used in key areas. You already have a strong sense of surprise and suspense in your choices, the wording, and now images. I would look around in OpenGameArt.org for a few sound effects to bring in. Also, I would suggest to look for some suspenseful or abstract-looking Twine games here on itch, so that you look for functionality to add. I can tailor some of my content that you and every one want to do next, so bring me questions :)
Lovely addition of art. You should give sound effects a try! The chimes of the elevator moving up or down would add some extra life to the action triggers. You might also take the opportunity to try some timed events on the player to make the elevator come to life as a character. Maybe the door closes after a certain time and the player gets stuck on a floor with a creepy character, etc. Good work! Keep it up.
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This is coming along nicely. The artwork really helps here. In class, please remind me to teach you all how to add sound effects. I think something like this could be used in key areas. You already have a strong sense of surprise and suspense in your choices, the wording, and now images. I would look around in OpenGameArt.org for a few sound effects to bring in. Also, I would suggest to look for some suspenseful or abstract-looking Twine games here on itch, so that you look for functionality to add. I can tailor some of my content that you and every one want to do next, so bring me questions :)
Lovely addition of art. You should give sound effects a try! The chimes of the elevator moving up or down would add some extra life to the action triggers. You might also take the opportunity to try some timed events on the player to make the elevator come to life as a character. Maybe the door closes after a certain time and the player gets stuck on a floor with a creepy character, etc. Good work! Keep it up.